Wow this is a great poem I really lyked it keep up the awesome work imma add this 2 my favs =) 5/5

I loved this. The flow and rhythm of the poem were a perfect fit, easy to read, etc. It also had a lot of feeling in it, I enjoyed it.

This is a poem I believe many can relate to. Really so simple to understand even your shallow boy friend could get the meaning
I can't find a flaw in the use of contemperary
language to describe your disaproval of a lying lover
I enjoyed reading this even though it brought tto my memory of many such situations

Perfect one ,

great feeling, jerk guy it seem
and YOU have a kind heart lady ,
i sugest you change it or you will get hurt more often

5/5

"They said you were cheater"
``.."they said you were [a] cheater."

"Alls you do is lie"
``All not alls.

"You played like there was no tomorrow
Had countless other girls
But came back, and lied some more
Saying I was your only world"
``Awh, =\ I'm sorry you had to go through this. Some guys are losers.

"And that clearly shows you
Of lies, you'll get sick and tired
The tale of the broken heart
Proves you can never love a liar. "
``I loved this last stanza. It said everything.

Overall, a good write. I think the poem sometimes rhymed in some places, and then in others it didn't.. but the flow wasn't bad at all.. soo nice job. 5/5 (:

Hmmm perfect i never ever love a liar!!!!!!!!!

great expressing ur thoughts here seems really dedicated to me. it was perfect and all the lines are definitely written well and outstandding keep on writing all what u feel! 5/5

Wow!
This poem is excellent.
It flowed freely and I could understand everything perfectly.
I write poems in a similar style to yours.
I especially liked,

"And that clearly shows you
Of lies, you'll get sick and tired
The tale of the broken heart
Proves you can never love a liar. "

Great Ending!
Keep on writing poems. You are very talented.
-Justina

Brilliant work ! this poem really touched me, i know exactly how u feel... u know how to express urself perfectly& all i can say is great poems come from gifted writers