Honestly, I really liked that poem. I relate because we all sometimes hide what we are from others. Putting on a fake persona to make it look as if things are just dandy. Good job.

-Dan

Wow..That was really sad..People being alike in that way is hard to believe (trust me I know, I still have a hard time believing it myself, and I'm one of them) but that is touching..

5/5
Keep It up!

-Ally

Love it especially the last line.. it's a sympathetic one... Keep it comin' 5/5