I like how you write "Dear my life" I've heard dear diary and stuff like that, but never dear my life. It was a such a sad poem though.. I've thought about suicide many many times, it's not fun.

no one would really notice.
`` I'm sure a lot of people would notice..

This was a great poem, although depressing. Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Hmm... Yeah 'Dear My Life' was different... Sad and depressing but well-written in my opinion... 8)
Keep it up..! :)