Definately a fantastic piece of poetry, the first line grabs the reader and it only gets better from there on...an excellent word choice, very strong but the flow wasn't affected to much....excellent work 5/5 GG23

I'm still thinking about this poem; the meanings are wonderful, pregnant, and multi-various. It's that sheer facet of the poem that requires more consideration... and that's frankly quite a beautiful facet of the poem.

Wonderfully expressed thoughts as ever..

Keep it up NILE...

I still have not pieced together all of your first stanza lol I really like the second though:

"Music flies, whispering
over fields soaked with liquefied, sapphire imagination."

This was beautiful to me, I got such a picture in my head, just wonderful.

I also really like your ending line, your wording is nice and not over complicated. As always a great job.

This is amazing.
Sad, powerful, moving.
The vocabulary and flow are flawless as is the form.

Amazing work, I love it.
Keep it up, 5/5

jess ~

I had it all within one lucid, cerulean second-
there's some shattered light hanged behind the window.

^^^^
these words were enchanting...
the whole poem was captivating...
original,aesthetic,intriguing.

take care
Isha

Wow, this is really good. The first stanza was great and it kept getting better. I loved the wording in the second stanza. Great ending line, and very captivating all throughout this poem. Keep writing, always and forever.....

I really like this one.