This is an amazing poem 5/5

Ohh i hate poems like this.. because they are true!! this happends everyday to girls and hopefully your poem can let them know it's ok to tell..save themselves... very well done!

Wow, this is so sad. you put so much detail into this, the image of the poor little girl is still burned into my mind. excellent job.

Omggg... this is really sad, and unfortunatly its too true. it happens way too often. nice write though 5/5