The Path of Ligthrins and Hollows (part1) story

Huff puff huff faster and faster i run as i think to myself with the blood dripping down my face, faster i run what have i done? What have i become? The police sirens, trailing off to the street of Maple Tree West 529.
I see a dark alley way, and walking unsuspectingly there. I find a large box and crouch myself inside the box. Images are flashing flashing the blood, the screams, the sadness in the tears, and myself. . I begin to reminse about my past full of solitude, corrupted thoughts of hurting, killing, and watching people become miserable as I am broken inside. I was evil as a child.My parents nedlected me and I was alone until i meet a kid named janeki.He felt my pain as he went through the same but he was stronger not to let the darkness consume him.He introduced me to christ, playing activities, like video games, swimming, and reading books. As we grew older we made a promise to work as dectives after college. Even though I have changed the darkness is still there encouraging me to do devilish crimes. The full moon covered by dark clouds. All I hear are the hissing of alley cats protecting there territorry. My eyes slowly begin to fall. The last thing I see was a white light and as I lay, It fells like I lost the good inside of me.

**I will finish soon rate or comment what i have so far**