Ooh...I really like that. The general reminds me of my dad a bit. (not in a good way). But great work!
Take care,
Ignoris

INTERESTING

I thought this was very good,a unique style. The contrast between a dancer ,serene and skilled to someone angry and out of control was outstanding! well done.

Inspired, no doubt, by the magnitude of contempory life...
very effectively delivered...
speaking raw and real Truth to imaginary power..(!)

Thanks to everyone for all the positive feedback!

This is DEFINETLY the BEst poem of yours.
I really like it.

Wow you left me wondering! i like that! i like this poem a lot! its impressive to me when someone can write a great short poem!