WOW!! amazing job!

Ah, I see you posted our poem. And retitled it. I really enjoyed working with you on this master piece that we created. You really helped me widen my poetry specter with this poem.

You basically forced me to use a rhyme scheme (Which was new to me and a way) and also forced me to a syllable count. But by force I mean "trained" me to do so, which helped so much. I thought I would write a comment thanking you for everything that you taught me while writing this poem.

We created a great piece indeed. 5/5

;)

Oh, I see you changed a few things, but it's still amazing. You both did a great job with this and I enjoyed reading it very much. You two are a wonderful collab team and this poem was just amazing. The flow of this was very smooth and the poem also had a consistant rhyme. Very well done. Hope to see you doing more collabs sometime soon. 5/5. :]

Great collab with slience mr. darcy. very awsome poem.5/5
**harlea

That was a great poem! keep on writing!
Silent Angel

One of the most well written poems i've ever had the pleasure of reading.
Instant favourite.
5/5, keep writing, you've got some serious talent.
xx

This was wonderful I enjoyed it . I have never tried to work with anyone on a poem but you did this very well. Great job.

Omg!
i'm definitely..just speechless Mr Darcy!
i think this poem is absolutely amazing.
i got goosebumps, seriously. :)
5/5 keep on writing!

daveed

Excellent poem for two different writers you guys got the flow perfect the rhyme is slightly iffy in one or two places, but all in all a lovely poem that was very well written, well done

Grant

I really admire this piece. It was well defined. I loved how you titled it the "black widow" and used some of the same symptoms that the black widow has....well...some of the feelings perhaps. I felt the hatred in this write but i also felt the desperate love as well. Not a i-need-you-so-bad kind of love but a i-loved-you-and-you-lost-me kind of love. A realization love if you will. A powerful poem indeed and i loved reading it. As always your work is never a waste of my time and thank you very much :)
I've hit a writers block and haven't been doing much writing...although i did write a piece about a love an older couple shared...very touching lol
i'll post it soon (if i can find it lol)
thanks again
keep up the good writing
Always,
~*~Amber~*~

Ths tstructure of the poem i s amaizing , make me think of a sutrcural and logical sientific minds that made this , and ti si a collab soo it mamke it amaizing more ,

but since i am talkin i did not understand this:
syringe despair just like cocaine

i know cocaine give you false reality adn false feeling of extesy , but not despair,

soo am i missing somthning here

?

other then that you have my vote

All I can say is Wow! Great collab :)
Take Care Cindy

Some forced rhyming in this one, but for the most part, it flows well. An interesting read.