Falling Awake (rictameter)

by Viola   Jul 22, 2008


Sunrise
Beautiful sight
The lights inside your eyes
Reflections of the golden sun
Bringing a brand new day for us to seize
All my worries just fall away
When you are near to me
As I awake
Sunrise

Rictameter: A Rictameter has 9 lines in total with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2. The first and last lines are the same two syllables.
**Again, my first one of this kind. Just experimenting with the style.

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