Well done! Very good work and provokes a lot of emotion.

~chinwe~

This has some good lines and good rhymes, 5/5

comment bk :)

If the past and present would intertwine,
If the world would crash down
Would anyone be there just in time
Just to keep me safe from harm?

^^^

this stanza was my favourite,a question anyone can relate to, the whole poem was mind blowing...ur talented...got a way with words...keep writing !

A+
Great work.
But be happy!
Cheer up :-)

Wow4
this is only a great poem
5/5 looovee it..

Truly beautiful.

That was really god! :) the 4th stanza had great flow and rhyme.

Keep it up :)
5/5

Good job...nice poem