Eternal Love, Forever Broken

by Sydney   Jul 22, 2008


This girl has gone through emotional battles,
Just praying, "God help me through this"
But whenever she begged and pleaded for help,
The situation had just gone amiss

She didn't know which direction to go,
Always clueless, lost, and confused
Determined to find true love in any place,
The pain gradually decreased and defused

Turning back to a special someone,
He came to her with open arms
Reluctantly, she came but didn't want to get hurt
He told her there was no need to be alarm

They went together to that special prom,
Reunited and as happy as could be
But no one knew the night would end
As a war of anger and jealousy

Her ex was present and so was his date,
She saw how perfectly the girl took her place
Holding back tears and faking deceiving smiles,
Her man offered his warm embrace

Realizing this wasn't how it was meant to be,
She cried and ran into the cold, stormy night
And her date quickly ran after her
Saying, "Baby, everything will be alright!"

He tried to comfort her, holding her close,
Then attempted to end the sadness with a kiss
But the only thing he did not know,
Was that she thought it wasn't meant to be like this

Drenched in rain, she pushed him away,
Simultaneously breaking his heart
Knowing she may have ruined everything,
If she still loved her ex, they had to part

Running away into the chilling darkness,
She screamed, "Why do I still love you like this?!"
Now she has nothing but a damaged heart
And believes in this world, only pain exists

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...I love this poem. The emotions are so real. I feel like you open up your heart and just let your true feeling pour onto the paper. This was so deep and moving. I love the imagery. Wow... Keep it up hun. You got talent. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by Im Not Emo

    This is so sad! made me want to cry because of all the pain that girl must have felt, the feeling of being torn, and then she loses everything. So sad. Hopefully she ends with a happily ever after. It's always like a stab to the heart to see someone else with the one you truely care about. AMAZING!! Cheers to your amazing writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This is so touchable..That girl got a lot of pain in her heart and she lost everything..That is so sad..
    But sure someday this pain will fade away..
    I loved the poem,it is well-written and the flow was good..
    Keep up the good work..