Haveing a ,falling apart, in a relationship is always hard. I hope you pull through. good peom. check mine out when you get a chance. thx

On the fourth line, it should be 'to' not 'too'. Setting grammatical errors aside, I really enjoyed your poem. At first, I didn't think it would have any kind of rhythm since the lines looked so irregular. But in reality, this poem had more rhythm than I have seen in most, and it rhymed as well! I thought this was a very good poem.

hey thx 4 reading my poems! I think this is one of my fav. poems that u have writtin! It's emotional and i hope to checkout any new poems u write
thx agian

I thought that the overall meaning was very well expressed but i think that sometimes poems are best when they are not completely to the point. The poem itself was written wonderfully and flowed very well.

~*~Christina~*~

it was a good poem, but the topic is used so much that i would have liked to have seen some kind of original flair. i know you can do that, ive read some of your other stuff. peacee

good job, i felt the same way about my bf when we broke up but we're back 2gether now, well newayz good job, keep writting, i hope to read more of ur work

I definately know how you feel in this poem...I would die if I had to live without the man I love...anyways I gotta jet the bell just rang for 5th period....keep up the good work Much Love JJ