Well done! You stretched in some syllables on one or two lines, but it still sounded nice. I liked it. You work with rhymes very nicely.

Wow. This poem was great!! the words and rhyming were excellent. They just flowed together pefectly. Well done. Keep it up!!

5/5

I can relate to this alot, i understand the feeling, very good 5/5

Wow an amazing poem, it was really awesome you put so much description and feeling into it literally blew me away GREAT JOB

This poem was wonderful. I believe a lot of us can relate to it. Well done and keep writing!

5/5 I genuinly enjoyed this poem you wrote because Ive felt the same way at a certain point but other than that good poem and i shall be reading more of yours

Aww what a sad poem

So i guess I'll just take a gun
To my invisible heartache...
Thats so Sad aww

Well done i enjoyed this poem alot it was very expressive and had a nice rhyme scheme keep up the good work! :-)