Comments : Invisible Heartache

  • 15 years ago

    by Austin

    Well done! You stretched in some syllables on one or two lines, but it still sounded nice. I liked it. You work with rhymes very nicely.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    Wow. This poem was great!! the words and rhyming were excellent. They just flowed together pefectly. Well done. Keep it up!!

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by daniel

    I can relate to this alot, i understand the feeling, very good 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Eikel ARCANGEL Cespedes

    Wow an amazing poem, it was really awesome you put so much description and feeling into it literally blew me away GREAT JOB

  • 15 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This poem was wonderful. I believe a lot of us can relate to it. Well done and keep writing!

  • 15 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    5/5 I genuinly enjoyed this poem you wrote because Ive felt the same way at a certain point but other than that good poem and i shall be reading more of yours

  • 15 years ago

    by Lil Ash

    Aww what a sad poem

    So i guess I'll just take a gun
    To my invisible heartache...
    Thats so Sad aww

  • 15 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Well done i enjoyed this poem alot it was very expressive and had a nice rhyme scheme keep up the good work! :-)