Beautiful. The way u wrote year by year is really unique great writing skills, keep it up.

Wow. This poem is excellent. It was structured beautifully and the flow was flawless. I loved how in the beginning of most of the stanzas you put, 'Dear' something. That was very creative and made the reader realize right away the the poem was sort of like a poetic letter to your brother. I can feel how hard it was to write this poem and I commend you on that since this is your first one. I'm sorry for what you had to go through and there's people on this site that can help you put it behind you and move on. The forums are really good for that.
So welcome to the site and you have a fan already :).

5/5 Good job and take care!
-Shannon <3

I was moved to tears by your poem. It was very well written, I felt what you were going through. Keep writing.....

This was a excellent write and the format was amazing. I like how it was kind of like little parts of a letter thoughtout the entire poem and how every stanza had to do with a different age [year]. Honestly, I don't think there were any flaws in this one. You could clearly tell how the author felt throughout the entire poem.. that was completely clear. I admire that you wrote about something true though, and about something that has happened you to.. because not many people get the courage to do something like that..but most definatly you have put together a fabulous piece here. The rhyme was consistant and the flow was smooth. Great write. Flawless. 5/5.

Wow....just......wow. this poem gave me chills. i was drawn completely into the poem from the very beginning. you put so much detail into this. i love how you set it up. the word after dear shows how your opinion and view of him changed throughout your life. it added so much to the poem. you did such an amzing job on this, i still can't stop thinking about it. the images that came to my mind as i was reading are still playing over and over in my head. this is definitly one of the best rape poem i've read in a long time. it must have taken a lot out of you to write, and it obvious you put a lot of thought into it. i'm so sorry this happened to you.

Omg.. this gives me chills lol im sitting here crying. i know exactly how you feel. id love if ud come check out my poems. nyways GREAT work! outstanding
1 5/5 i wish i could give it more.

Oh wooww... Great write! It's sad but portrays deep emotions... It was very brave of u and u have done really well!!

Keep It Up! 8)
5/5.

The poem was constructed perfectly and uniquely although it was filled of sadness and anger. I admire the way how you put all those things in sequence it was fantastic..Extremely unique..Good job.

Brilliant poem!
It flows really nicley, although the rhyming is abit off in some places.
Other than that its great, really well written and i hope this isnt a true story, if it is your really brave for righting this :)
5/5 Steph .

I find it incredible that you could transform the emotions that you had to overcome to write this and sculpt it into something that has it's own unique style and atmosphere. What you've done here is one of the many beauties of writing, you've formed a poem based off your own true emotions and experiences in life, and that is what makes this poem remarkable in it's own way. Excellent work.

That was absolutely AWESOME!!!
Oh my gosh you are truly great writer!!
I admire your work!!
The way you can put that in words its just incredible!!
=D

This brought tears to my eyes, this was written with deep emotion and the pain you portrayed well.
Well done, xxx

VERY VERY GOOD!! it took me sometime to no what your talking about but once i did i adored this poem, very goood definatly 5/5
i love all the passion in the last dear rapist its very good it definatly drew me in and made me read faster what im trying to say is VERYYY GOOD!

Angel,this poem takes the reader step by step through the pain of abuse and some of the thoughts and feelings involved,it must have been very hard to share this,continue to do so it is a very healing,excellently written.

This Is Extremely good!
So Creative & i Know
It Probably Takes Alot To Express That!
But you Did Excellent!

Wow I mean WOW! This reminds me of what happened to me. I mean my brother didnt rape me or anything but I was molested by my uncle and I started cutting and 12 I am now 13 and still havent stoped stil haft to go to court but anyways I love this poem keep up the good work and yeah I can tell you work really hard on this!

Wow...
I'm not gonna lie, that moved me to tears.

Really good content, but the meter was a bit off.

I'll rather not comment on the content of this well written poem, your poem flowed quite well and i enjoyed the structure of it

Grant

OMG!!! plz plz plz tell me thats not true omg it made an amazing poem but is so very very sad. if it is true then you are ana amazingly brave person to write it very good job

kiwi

Honest to God... this is my favorite poem ive read on this site. its amazing. there are no words to describe it. just amazing.