Comments : Life Is Like An Ocean (collab with James)

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is an absoulutey wonderful collab!

    "Life is like an ocean.
    So surprising and so full of emotion.
    The roar of the waves is rough.
    To escape their hold, would be tough.
    Just like leaving behind the pain,
    An ocean likes to play its games."

    ^I love how you say life is like an ocean. And this whole stanza really got me interested and wanted to read more....

    "You walk farther into the water
    And decide to let go of all your bothers
    Let the waves wash it all away
    Live for now and worry another day.
    With an ocean, comes something new.
    A feeling, a sensation, that you never knew."

    ^Such a inspiring stanza! Your words touched me and really had me smiling the whole time!
    The rhyme is amazing and I really felt like I was right there, next to the ocean, watching the waves.....

    In this whole poem, I could image everything you wrote and I really loved each bit of this. This collab is really beautiful, and really calms and soothes me when I read it. It gives off inspiration and a feeling of peace.
    Great work!