Such a vivid description, and I prefer it short and sweet. Keep it up

Brilliant!
An awsome tribute to Twilight,
Great descriptions, awsomely penned.
Very well done.
=)
Kat x

This was like the best twilight poem so far i think. wish it was longer.

Wow! Good job!

Oh I love it!
It captures Edward perfectly!
Very beautiful wording as well.
Terrific. =)
x

Sorry! ^ Thats the second time ive commented! =) but, its wonderful none the less. =) x

Wonderful rhyming and this really describes Edward, great job, you wrote this very well. Keep writing, always and forever...

Wow. is this the chapter in the meadow or something?