This poem is very deep. I cant fel the emotions when i read it. Nice ood job keep up the good work.:) And you head up 5/5

Awesome poem...I loved the darkness and blackness in it..It's my favorite kinda writing..

Eternal damnation without salvation.
Hearts were broken, time won't heal.
This wound is deep. No consideration.

I think it's the most perfect part of the poem bcoz it's so deep, true and so sad...
Great job...Keep it up:)..