I like your style of writing.
if you could increase the length, or..maybe some more repetition you could be a really good song writer I bet.
anyway, good job.
keep up the good work.

I enjoyed this poem. I loved the emotion in it and I just loved it all =] 5/5

Brilliantly written...
5/5

VERY NICE! it feels real, its feels familiar! Its one to be remember'd! Im loving it!

Your gifted... thats all i can say!

Another poem that describes me a couple of years ago!! It just went straight to my heart! GReat job!