Written with great structure but as usual your poems seem to be filled with deep sadness. But its good when you mentioned just remember the good..Stay strong as you are right now...and dont forget to smile..xDD

I loved every minute of this poem. i liked the structure. you put so much emotion into this. excellent job.

Wow... this really is a great write... Very sad tho... But still I love the way u develop every line so that it tells a complete story.. Superb Job! :)
Keep it up!

A very sad and emotional story portrayed through the poem. written excellently...structure perfect, meaning that it flowed nicely. hope things are better now :( x