This was good, I loved it.
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5/5

Perdy deep fer someone so young but it rings loud with the truth. keep it up, Ill be reading somemore .

Have you lived through a lot for someone of your age? Hm, your poems remind me of my sister. Painful and beautiful work again.

"cant" should be "can't".

"wont" should be "won't".

and "i" should be "I".

This was really good and gave off some of your true thoughts, I wish I could have read more, you have intrigued me with your words.

God bless you and Merry Christmas!

~MaryAnne