Wow...this is a very strong poem
really beautiful, your love for her shines through! wonderfully penned
i think im gonna have to check out more stuff from you :)
keep writing!

Wow! i was actually right! =] so the sunrise is a reunion with your loved one! i love your use of vocabulary/language, its awesome, how you penned your thoughts into a flow of words, quite like a song.
My favourite stanza:

Forever might be along time;
And an eternity might be insanity,
But I'm willing to loose my mind;
If it means you'll steal my heart...

^^These lines are so perfect, i love them.
Your writing is so heartfelt and deep, like your thoughts and emotions just spilled over =]
Very very well done.
Don't stop writing.
(btw, i had to write this separately, because the stupid browser decided to refresh on its own or something... =])

MEZi x

I like the poem's first parts but it's ending lost me. I've noticed that when a person starts a poem out strong, it becomes hard to develop the poem and make it stronger. I injoyed this poem but it didn't strike me as one that I would remember. However I do want to get you props. On that strong begining.

Thank you for the read