Its an awesome poem, but almost made me cry. good writting though keep up the good work xx-amber.

This is beautiful poem...reminds me on mine little bit :]
But really,I almost cried...I just can't understand how people can treat children like that...jerks
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A well written poem though it is such a sad story. The truth of its much too common occurance makes it even sadder...5/5...JIM