Its an aswome poem im so proud of you, you write so emotional such strong poems and they are all breath taking! ((5))

Dang this reminds me of a story i once told someone lol. It is kinda speakin to me as if i should do something about it lol. Great job
-vino

Whoa, thats deep, awesome

To deep of darkness. But I have to give it a 10 it's awsome (^_^)

This is very dark but describes things that happen everyday. I loved it, 5/5!!

Excellent!!!!!!!! 5/5

I will say 100% i will this poem...i'm really looking forward for other poem...

Wow... this poem was really amazing. just very vivd and deep. dark and just awesome. i loved it :)