Goodone.. keep it up sister Noorie

This is a different style of writing ...It was nice...
U always surprize me with new stuff...This makes ur poems unique and makes u the best writer ever..
I wish ya good luck ..
Plz take care..

Very good work... Lines are very good... to me that's most important aspect of any kind of petry. Very well written. :)

'Wandering and lost
Went to embrace you again
Final fatal kiss'

i loved this stanza. this one is so deep and melancholic. amazing poem.

Um love the flow and choice of words keep doing what your doing

...nice....terrific