This poem was different to me but in a good way, did a good ob with this, keep up the good work!

Wow, i loved this. i can relate with it almost completely.

"All I have to say to you is
that you got what you intended.
I payed for my mistakes and yours.
How do you like how it ended?"

i loved the ending. excellent job.

I like the pattern you've set up in your poem. It's nice and it flows well. good poem. It was really moving.

5/5

xo

"Try and reason.
Where did it get you?
Now your two steps back.
When will you be through?"

^Love how you ask these questions, and this whole poem is so amazing, you did a fabulous job! The title is great and you really drew me into this poem, nice work! Keep writing, always and forever!

"Tell me, am I supposed to be happy?
When everything I do or want
causes me aching pain and anguish.
It all comes back to taunt me. "

i can relate to this ^^ in sooooo many ways
i loved it!!
:D
you did an AMAZING job
the flow was perfect
5/5

-halie

Amazing how far you went with it.
Told me I was the one but proposed to her.
Sorry, she accidentally now knows the truth.
It's off. To the wedding that is referred.

^^^^ sweet revenge! I liked this stanza a lot, Tabi!
I have seen you make more than one poem about this, I am guessing you hve been through this in real life, if so: what a loser that guy is! He has lost, not you!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Hmm, thats messed up but people can be really mean a hurtful. The wording was great and the emotion was strong. I really liked this poem. I gave it a 5/5. I saw nothing wrong with it.

This was a bit more simple than your other poems but still the emotion is so very strong in your words. This presents the mood of "Yeah it hurt, but I am still standing and its time to pay"
I like that attitude and strength.
I like how thats conveyed
"Amazing how far you went with it.
Told me I was the one but proposed to her.
Sorry, she accidentally now knows the truth.
It's off. To the wedding that is referred. "
5/5
laura