Amazing .. simply amazing and i love the way you eneded the poem - you really nailed it. I love the paragraph about loosing time. Good work
5/5

Chinwe

OH this poem is so good , I was captivated by every line. Not just the perfect flow and the captivating expressions, but the graduation of the story. Every line had relevence to the next . The harmony of each line gave balance of beauty to an otherwise painful poem. I sent this one to poem of the week and added you to my favorite authors list ....Jim...5/5

Awww... that's very emotional.
Love your choice of words, great piece!
These are my fav lines:

Now clear skies are blurred with my tears
The colors of the rainbow are now nothing but smears