Wow, strong poem. Nicely written.
Good job

Ii like it.. Can totally relate to it dawg.. Keep it tite mama..

Love basically sucks,

I like it and its true wat you wrote i really like it

Wow so painful and so true. i love the flow and the word choice. so much emotion in this piece. very strong 5/5 katiekins

Simple yet strong.
Well written.
And I could truly relate.

I've learned to
never--accept a promise told.

You never know for sure--
if one will keep it.

Good write.
5/5 I'm sure many can relate!

This poem is true and most feel this way most of the time sweetie lol and i have even felt this way before when my first love broke my heart but mine was an engagment that went out of the door lol but still good poem! :) 5/5
Lady Ashes