I blinked.

by beautiful dreamer   Jul 28, 2008


Walking in the hallway
thinking about you.
and all of a sudden,
i saw you.

i knew you were the one
right when i saw you
wishing you and her,
would just be through.

a week later
i heard the news
that you and her
were actually through.

in English class
you came into class and winked
you asked me out,
and in a blink..i was with you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    That is so cute.
    Great job.
    I love it.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    This is cute!

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    That was really cute and creative. Some of the sentenses seemed a little out of place and the flow was a little off but besides that, The idea of the poem was really nice and you definatly have talent. keep it up, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aw!!!! this was sooo sweet! its officially going in my favs!! i loved it!! great poem!!

    Aly

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