Omg, what an amazing poem, it was really touching and terrifying at the same time.You know I have always had dreams about my loneliness and I used to see my self screaming aloud but I couldn't hear my voice like something was choking my throught.
I can really feel your pain.
Wonderful5\5.

Omg another amazing poem by you i love it so much! i love your dark writing it just grabs my heart! lovely job love! 5/5!

This poem is asome i loved it
you are a truely asome poet
keep up the asome work 1000/1000

Well, to be honest...that wasn't one of your best.
Girl you've done and written much more amazing stuffs here.
But anyway..here we go :

I can't think nor feel anymore
When silence and blackness roar

These lines are heartbreaking...I totally loved them, especially the expression "roar" with silence and blackness, so heartfelt !!

I'm calling out to be heard
But I know that no one would have cared
Or it seems that my voice isn't that loud !!
And will never be noticed by the crowd

I guess this stanza was my fav out of the whole poem =)
Girl don't be so darkie, you really should change the category for some times, dark poems are great, and in my personal point of view, I'm addicted too, but hey you need a change =D

Good job in here
Rock on
Luv ya xx

...death's mistress!
Hmmm... That's interesting! Well expressed thoughts. A good poem!

One of ur bests hon
i really was touched by this particular part

""I feel empty inside
Yet there is no one by my side
I can't think nor feel anymore
When silence and blackness roar""

keep it up :)

I really enjoyed reading this.
I enjoyed the way that it flowed and the words were perfectly picked.
It was very relatable.
Keep up the good work.
xoxoxo

Nicely written as always..

Keep it up

I have not written a poem in a while. i am inspired to write one. lol. great poem by the way.

Wow !! what an amazing poem. I never really liked dark poems but this one is really great.
I loved the ending especially the last two stanzas.
"My life is over, here.
I stopped breathing and the end is too near.
I bow to my chained existence,
As I'll be gone in seconds to be the death's mistress."
Great job again, keep it up.

I enjoyed this poem alot yet it seems you were stretching yourself thin on trying to always rhyme sometime when you need the right words you cant always rhyme because to get the correct feel sometimes you need to free verse your poems a little but hey just my opinion

I really liked this. The rhymes were really good, and just the word choice in general.

"I'm calling out to be heard,
But I know that no one would have cared
Or it seems that my voice isn't that loud !!
And will never be noticed by the crowd."

^^ Personally, I do not think you should have exclamation marks at the end of the third line.

"Here I am, taking a look around
I still have faith to be found.
Oh my God!! I am buried alive,
I'm left in a coffin, and no way out to survive"

^^ Same in this stanza. I think you should remove the exclamation marks and add a comma or something.

One more thing; I think you should keep up with your puncuation. You ended some with a period, others have nothing. It'll look better with them at all of the ends.

Five out of five.

``Briana

Love it truly I do this poem that you wrote is truly true. 5/5

Love it truly I do this poem that you wrote is truly true. 5/5

Seems that ur an amazing poet..this poem was gr8 but thats not new 4 u..plz keep writng..ur awsome..