by smiley Jul 29, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
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Since the day I fell in love you with I never stop be happy |
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When I was reading your poem it sounded like you were missing some words. IT didn't make scence in parts |
by smiley
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Oh am spanich but I don't write good |
by H E Losey
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There are many errors here that detract from what you are trying to say. It appears as though English is not your first language so it will be difficult for a while but you will get there. (this could be a direct translation from an Asiatic[?] language) |
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"Since the day I fell in love you with I never stop be happy" |