The Wind

by H E Losey   Jul 30, 2008


The wind blowing softly
upon the night skies
Gently pushes the feathery
clouds past the moon beams
Hiding, peeking, the lover
searches with teary eyes
To find that one bright star
to wish upon for a dream

A different wafting breeze
caresses the same sky
And slowly clouds reveal
the moon and a star
Another lover, weeping, tries
to focus weary eyes
And send a wish to join
with the other, from afar

Published 2006

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  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    I agree with the other commenter. It does not read very well. It is almost very visual for me, but I needed a little bit more.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    It just does not read right for me but it is all there if you know what I mean, yet it feels uncomplete? Like you I to am posting poems written years agotrying to edit them to get them right is very hard