Comments : Dreaming

  • 15 years ago

    by Lori

    Once you awake
    Its thought they never were
    And all that your dreamed
    Fades into a blur.

    Favorite line there Raychil! Wow! That is all I got to say. I love it. The thing that really draws me into this piece is that you can relate to it so well. This has happened to me alot actually. Great write Raych, your an inspiration:) 5/5

    <3 Loni