Wow that was a deep read. I loved it. Great job. Shanik

This is an amazing piece. i like this poem.

(I love her like spring loves March)

This part really touches me.....
u really insert full of the expressions in this simple sentence.

Great job keep writing. i'll take this to my fav list. i'll read more of ur poems soon.... =)

An extremely powerful poem, beautifuly written. I hope your cave is not so deep that you can't climb out. 5/5