Comments : Hurt

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    Kait, I've read things you've been saying in the chat, and I've read your poems, and hell, I've put together a couple of poems with you now, I'm just gonna tell you not to give up, never to give in, you'll always have people on your side, you'll always have people on the other side trying to bring you down, but you know, they're not worth it, you're higher up and better than them. I'm saying this in a comment on this poem because I read it and it just spoke to me.
    It's raw. It's blunt. And we've all felt like that and been brought down by life. Heartbreak sucks, life sucks but we only have one shot to make it out of the mess smiling laughing at everything underneath you.
    I hope you don't stop writing, and I hope you don't give up.
    All I have is words but it's all I need to vent away all my anguish and despair.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a great piece. very heartfelt. and poems that come from the heart are the best one's to read. you have a writing style somewhat like mine. i can say i can relate to this poem. i loved it. job well done. and best of luck! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Yesssssss this is really hurt,, i can relate it.