Wow!!!! I like it.. i like the flow.. Nice job =)

Oh so true this poem.
good poem.
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Nothing Lat Forever was very well described in this piece..I loved how you mentioned and analyze each situations given by you..Very powerful one..I loved the part about meeting new friends and then later becam rivals..sooo freakin true..As well as love, its soo true until you finally meet the true person for you..Nice job..

Great flow and well written 5/5