You and me in lost world

by Goodbye   Aug 1, 2008


Wake me up to cry with you
shake the stones from my heart

Dying innocence wants to live,
empty eyes are starving for love

Hunger for God grows more and more
as we are getting close to the End

Hold my hand while we jump
out of this society of lacking morals

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Edited with help Grant. Thanks for correcting my grammar. Luv.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    I agree with grant above...

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice and oh so deep :)

    Well done

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Noor this is a lovely poem with heartfelt feelings of how moral standards degrade daily. Again a very well written poem with a deep meaning that i hope touches a few lives well done

    Grant

    PS: Noor says i helped edit, this is true, what she fails to mention is that there was almost nothing to edit.Some english speaking people on this site could take lessons from her.Well done Noor keep it up.

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