Love in harsh brackets

by Mel   Aug 1, 2008


Three hours sleep (disturbed)
Nicotine stains (yellow)
Hangover (nervous)
Things to do (cancelled)
Mobile phone (wont ring)
Food (don't think so)
Music (sentimental)
You (painful)
Me (broken)
Words (not spoken)
Mobile phone (rings)
Friend ( are you ok?)
Lie (yeah, great)
Thoughts (torture)
Evening (here again)
Look (passable)
Feeling (miserable)
Talk (about nothing)
Friends (don't understand)
Drink (oblivion)
Text U (no reply)
Die (inwardly)
Home (drunk again)
Repeat (just the same)
Three hours sleep (disturbed)
Nicotine stains...............

Of course it's love!1

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Wow.. What I like the most is that the poem is an identical scene of most of our lives..

    Routine, especially the love routine, kills us!

    ;)

    FIVE

  • 15 years ago

    by Lil Ash

    This poem flows nicely well done
    Keep it Up xD