So good. I imagined a scene like that very well.

Words Flowed terrifficly

Good job

This is a very sensual poem with great imagery flow and rhyme scheme

nothing to critisize here

This was great :D
the only thing that kindof confused me that it went from being like, "I"
to being like "She" and "He"
Otherwise the imagery was AMAZING.
5/5

Such a beautiful write. You both did a very wonderful job coming up with such a beautiful atmosphere and this poem also had some good imagery as well. :] Keep it up. Great job by the both of you.. 5/5

Pinning you up against the wall,
As our lips intertwine.
Standing before me was heaven,
This angel was all mine

^^^^When you read this the scene is set!
A very hot poem by you two, the sparks just flew right off the screen!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: Thank you so much for nominating my poem:)

Calp* calp* calp*
this is great!
its cool!