Aww.. so sad... i've picture this scenario a lot before...

you've pieced it together so beautifully!

5/5

keep up the good work :]

This is an unusual poem very well written. Very thought provoking about what passion or the lack thereof can effect someone
I enjoyed reading this one

Aww. This was sad, but I love the way you worded everything... It was a unique way to write the situation... Good flow and everything. Keep writing. :]] 5/5

I guess I better add more, since I give you a 2-liner. My bad. I think the title was really unique and it fit the poem really well. I love how you used the word "Murder" in you poem here. That was unique.
"I was the murderer
And love was the crime
My words were the weapon
And death was the time"
``Like in this stanza.. it was used in a unique way. This stanza summed it all up and I loved the way it was worded. Very powerful.

Overall, a great write. I wouldn't change a thing on this one. The rhyme/flow are both consistant and make the poem sound great.

This is a lyrical poem that reads like a ballad.
I think this was easier to catch the meaning of than most

Wow. This poem is.. amazing. It was sad, and emotional.

The funeral came five days later
A suicide note was read
"Without your love,I am nothing"
Is all it ever said"

-- In the third line, there should be a space after the comma.

That's the only thing I noticed that should've been different.

My favourite stanza is this:

"I was the murderer
And love was the crime
My words were the weapon
And death was the time"

-- LOOOVE that. The rhyming is awesome!

*Overall; you've written a good piece. Keep it up.

``Briana

Well well well, we have ourselves a sparkle of hope here!

"I was the murderer
And love was the crime
My words were the weapon
And death was the time "

Made me think, wont say what about, that is my secret, but bene!

Heart wrenchingly cold.
Spinechillingly wicked.
I like the story you portray.