So beautiful :]

i'm speechless

Wow Amber, that was really good. I loved it ^.^ keep it up

xD 5/5

Amber right??.....well love this poem I'll add this in my fav. keep up the wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

This is a very cute poem exploring romantic desires as well as emotions
I enjoyed reading this

5/5

This poem was just okay for me.
I can get where your coming from but there were errors i saw
one:
turns to a kiss from him. Leaving
you should have started leaving on a new line
two: There wasn't a lot of raw emotion for me
three: vocabulary could be stronger adding in a few spicy words really brings something to a poem
4/5