Aww... it cute.. i Love it. It's short but says a lot.. Awesome jon Nate =)

Who ever this girl is she should be lucky loz cuz you got style man! lolz but seriously i love the choice of words you use. " she is my life ,that's all i need." excellent

Thats a really cuuute poem :]

kinda funny, but this is my fav part:
"shes in my blood
she is my whole" << made me go, dang he really likes her"

5/5

~tia

Hey i realli like it. its cute xD
cept, in the last line, i think theres a typo?

it says he is it meant to be she?

xx

Awwe. it was short and sweet. i loved it.

-aprils conspiracy

So sweet. love it

Aaaaaaawww thats so sweet i love the way you made it as one person at the end and all its amazin for a short poem 10/10

Wow! whoever this girl, she is really lucky...even though this is short it's still so sweet...

5/5

It very exprisev and a grate poem

Short and sweet. Really cute.

WOW IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!

This is great. "She" sounds amazing.

I love you baby!!

To the world you could eb one person, but to one person you could be the world

This poem was very sweet, Nate. Love should be that overwhelming always, don't you think?
I saw a few flaws in interpunction and grammar that I have changed in the version below. When you copy it to Word and compare, you will see what I mean. With the minor changes, your poem will shine even more:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

She's in my heart
she's in my soul
she's in my blood
she is my whole
she is my life
thats all I need
if I'm shot
I shall not bleed
for she is my eternal shield
and when I fight I will not yield
for she is me
and I am her
I love her so
she is my world

^^

the last lines were so very cute!