Awwww love this poem truly keep up the wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

This is amazing! Love this poem: ) Keep it up!!

Wow...this was a really good poem....but again i feel i need to say that you really need to work on your grammar because even though this was a good poem it was difficult to understand...

I think this is your best one, i like it!:)
but i agree with the others on the grammar

Nice poem...

It was not bad i like the story becasue i have been down this road with people. though i do think that proof reading is a must i have been writting for about 6 years and i still have to do it.
but over all very nice 5/5