Amazing piece of work here ! :]

5/5

Hi... First of all I must say I just love the concept of this poem. And your description of it is very good. I enjoyed it's truthfulness! Wonderful poem! Keep writing!

Wow, I really like this poem, very heartfelt.

"He died for our sins
pain tearing through His skin
with arms stretched from right to left
He truly knows how far east is from west"

Such truthful words here, and I like your rhyming too-

This poem really tells and describes about Our Savior on the cross, dieing for our sins, and the last breath he breathed. It's amazing how much he loves us, it really is. Great piece though, a pleasure to read. Keep writing, always and forever....