Comments : Gold and Green

  • 11 years ago

    by EmoKitten

    Wonderful poem. You did a got job writing this i like it a lot :).

  • 11 years ago

    by Ash

    Amazing poem though with a sad ending. It was but a reminiscense of the past when everything seemed so perfect and jokes and laughter filled the air.

    The opening stanza was simply perfect and captivated. The flow was also perfect and added to the intensity and feeling of the entire poem. Superb write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Very nice! I really loved the title--not only did it capture the heart of the poem but it was a nice repetition of the line in the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good write. I liked the style of this poem. Enjoyed it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Deven

    This was a grate poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem has a great flow and I really enjoyed the style it was written in, each stanza is very well written and theoverall poem is perfectly suited to the heading of the poem =] Really great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    Wow this is really really good

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I don't see this as a family or friends poem, more of a sad or dark poem, but still good enough. 5/5 from the PoetryKnight
    aka
    Aaron

  • 10 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow.... this was such an excellent poem. It's very well done I absolutely love it! Amazing. It has a very good flow, and it's written very well. It also has a great story! Absolutely wonderfu!! I don't think there are any down-sides to this. 5/5

    Soda.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rocky

    I liked how ths poem reflected the happiness when we where younger. how the world seemed a better pplace. but then we loose as we grow older. so sad but true