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Wonderful poem. You did a got job writing this i like it a lot :).
Amazing poem though with a sad ending. It was but a reminiscense of the past when everything seemed so perfect and jokes and laughter filled the air.
The opening stanza was simply perfect and captivated. The flow was also perfect and added to the intensity and feeling of the entire poem. Superb write!
Very nice! I really loved the title--not only did it capture the heart of the poem but it was a nice repetition of the line in the poem.
Good write. I liked the style of this poem. Enjoyed it.
This was a grate poem
by Nobodys Hero
This poem has a great flow and I really enjoyed the style it was written in, each stanza is very well written and theoverall poem is perfectly suited to the heading of the poem =] Really great job!
Wow this is really really good
I don't see this as a family or friends poem, more of a sad or dark poem, but still good enough. 5/5 from the PoetryKnight
by Not Enough
Wow.... this was such an excellent poem. It's very well done I absolutely love it! Amazing. It has a very good flow, and it's written very well. It also has a great story! Absolutely wonderfu!! I don't think there are any down-sides to this. 5/5
I liked how ths poem reflected the happiness when we where younger. how the world seemed a better pplace. but then we loose as we grow older. so sad but true