A nice rhyme, but again you could add more. I'm starting to see a big similarity of a few of thse new poems of yours, writing about mistakes in life and how they really can't be changed.

Longer than we do for we seam to keep making them again and agian.

I like this a lot, very true, I just felt like you could add more on. But still this was very heartfelt. Keep writing, always and forever...