Aww... thatz cute.. i know how it feels.. and am happy u let ur heart open =) i love the poem. awesome job..

Bravoooo

i am sure love will win at last and i am glade you did not give up
and make this person pay for other pepole msitakes

you are great writer when it come to eelings

if you dotn keep it i will hunt you down and kill you lol

j/k

bkess you

"I've always ran from love
Scared to be shattered once more
Never really trusting people
My heart, was a locked door"

-- In the last line, the comma is not needed.

"But it was you who came along
You were the only one to care
You picked me up when I was down
Showed me, you'd always be there"

-- Again, the comma is not needed.

"I told you it was hard for me
Trusting someone with my heart
I said I was afraid to love again
Scared, to be again ripped apart"

-- lol. Again. Comma is not needed.

"But there you stood, facing me
Your heart still open as ever
Held my hand thought the rain
The sun, and cloudy grey weather"

-- I think, maybe, in the second line, you should replace "still" with "as". "..as open as ever.."

"You have been the only one
To show you even cared
Words can never describe these feelings
My heart, I am now willing to share"

-- Hm. I think you should reword the second line. Something like.. "To show me that you cared", perhaps?

"I know now I have nothing to fear
Your arms always catch me when I fall
You are my world, my everything
And the best I can give, is my all"

-- In the first line, you should add the word "that" after "now". Also, I do not feel as though the comma should be there in the last line. On this one, I could be wrong. I'm not positive.

"This is really hard for me
But I'm sure I've finally got it right
I love you baby, forever and always
With you, everything will be alright"

-- Aw. A beautiful ending to a beautiful poem.

Overall; I thought this poem was very sweet. I felt like it came straight from your heart, and every word holds so much emotion. You're written a very good piece here. Good job.

Five out of five.

``Briana

"I've always ran from love
Scared to be shattered once more
Never really trusting people
My heart, was a locked door"

This quatrain flowed well and was very revealing, baring the heart and soul

"But it was you who came along
You were the only one to care
You picked me up when I was down
Showed me, you'd always be there"

This quatrain flows as well complementing your lover

"I told you it was hard for me
Trusting someone with my heart
I said I was afraid to love again
Scared, to be again ripped apart"

"But there you stood, facing me
Your heart still open as ever
Held my hand thought the rain
The sun, and cloudy grey weather"

"Held my hand thought the rain"
This double metaphor could go over many heads as the rain is the pain that is not normally thought to think and many will wonder if you meant
Held my hand through the rain

"You have been the only one
To show you even cared
Words can never describe these feelings
My heart, I am now willing to share"

"I know now I have nothing to fear
Your arms always catch me when I fall
You are my world, my everything
And the best I can give, is my all"

"This is really hard for me
But I'm sure I've finally got it right
I love you baby, forever and always
With you, everything will be alright"

The poem continues this confidence and I, being an incurable romantic, love happy endings
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Beautifully done, love it :]

"I said I was afraid to love again
Scared, to be again ripped apart"
``You already mentioned this in the first stanza, but now you said ripped apart instead of shattered. But same thing.. the same idea.. that was really noticable.

"Held my hand thought the rain"
``Through, you mean?

"I know now I have nothing to fear
Your arms always catch me when I fall
You are my world, my everything
And the best I can give, is my all"
`Verrry beautifully said. :] Cute.

Overall, a poem written from the heart completely expressing your love for someone. Loooved the title, great job :] 5/5

Every stanza flowed perfectly and the imagery you created was beautiful =]
The rhyming was also very well done and i loved every line written ^^!
Great job this is a very sweet poem that i think youve written extremly well =]

Great job! I loved every bit of it.
It's so adorable, so sweet.

=] 5/5!

Good poem, you have a style i am still deciphering, enjoyable!

Felt it could have a bit more depth in description, you definitely have the talent for it, but it is your poem, if you are happy with it, then so am i :)

Awwwwww ur poem is sooo cute & sweet! ii love it! =)

I totally love this! It is exactly how i feel with my boyfriend!