Wow very powerful. You set the scene s perfectly. I could not have imagined a setting more beautiful. the way you put 'drizzles' instead of a simple 'falling' was so amazing.and the wa you actually took time to decribe the world as 'sleepy' itead of just 'wrold' was equally enchanting. I think this is an awesome piece.

5/5

Beautiful imagery used! This poem is excellent!
=] 5/5 Your choice of wording was great

Very well done. Good flow and image.

Thank you for your comment, i thought id read one of yours in return,
and the imagery of this is just amazing.
you have a great talent and good vocabulary as well if you truely only 13. keep up the great work

Nice display of nature at its pinnacle. very beautiful :)

Your word choice blew me out of the water! I am at a loss for words! WOW! You did a great job! Honestly, you did a fantastic job, you should've been in the recent top!

5/5

Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^