Sad situation but really good poem, 5/5. Em

This was a beautiful poem, i really didnt expect that end but i liked it. :D It was well written and the rhyming wasn't half bad lol

This poem is powerful and well written about a worthy theme

Amazing write! It flowed well and really painted a picture in my mind! Great job!

Haha at first i thought this was a poem about dying, then i thought of the poem as dying and going to Hell. then you pull abortion! so unexpected! amazing. clever. awesome. great fun to read.

I read this poem a long time ago and I thought I left my comment but it seems like I didn't. Oh well! When I finished reading this piece, I thought that the way you use "The gates of heaven had shut me in" that instead of being an encouraging phrase to say no to abortion.. is doing the opposite. I mean there are so many people who feel that earth is hell and they want to be in heaven and if the gates of heaven had shut that baby in.. Good for the baby because it won't come to know hell.. That's the way I thought when I finished reading that line.

I'm against abortion, I think we need more little angels on earth.

So that line was my only critique.