"But theres no cure."
`There's

"Its also mine."
`It's

"Someone hold me,
Wipe away my tears.
I'm going to be alone,
For the upcoming years."
`This stanza was really sad. I hope that your boyfriend supports you through your pregnancy and stops telling you that you are dumb for it.

Anyways, overall this poem was alright I guess. I would have wished for more..to make it your own, but the flow was good which kept the poem alive for the most part. 5/5

Very well written poem with a versatile rhythm. My hope is that the innocence reaches into the heart of the father

great poem
5/5

Nice piece of poetry.

Nice poem to read as i am about to be a father myself.

Such a sad poem, One can only hope your boyfriend see's things the way you do a baby can be a blessing =]
Beautiful piece of work, great job the flow worked very well!

The guy's dumb, you know what you want and that's the best thing you can do for yourself. Be strong.

Hun ur man is dumb if he thinks ur dumb he squirted and made it he's not a man be strong u will have ur emotions ur ups and downs if all fails have faith in god love the poem read mine

Awh girlie, thats awful :[
i hope that you do keep your baby,
if your boyfriend really loves you
he will understand, and be with you
through it all. if not, he doesn't deserve
you anyways.

<3always, katie

Aww this is really sad. why wouldnt he want you to keep it? abortion is horrible and you shouldnt give it away. dont listen to what he says. you did a really good job on this, it's really sad. nice job. 5/5

~Kristina

Very touchy subject..but it makes a powerful and emotional poem, and I can empathize with you. Whatever happens, just stay strong and know that you don't need a man