Excellent write you know the cycle has to
stop with you. if you don't stop the vicious
cycle of addiction then you will be a addict and your kids willbe addicts and so on and so on. thats why I GOT BETWEEN drugs and my kids. they will never be drug users ever
I will do whatever it takes <WHATEVER>
ADDICTION steals life and you can't
replace the life you waste. hear my words
and listen and I WILL SAVE YOUR LIFE
SORRY About the preaching but your excellent poem got me started. 5/5

Great job with flow and rhyme!
good word choice!
5.5

Thats why cy is on my favs... =]

Ohhh jimmy i love this. is there a reason its not on ur space?

Awe thats sweet and meaningful truely.
every father should at least listen to there daughters because there the ones who love them most.

nice i liked it =]
5/5

ps thank you for reading my poem too... so i returnd the favor hun =]..

Wow! This poem's a pack of nices: rhymes, meanings.. Etc. I like it and give u 5/5

This was very deep. i liked it. i have a lot of friends that are getting into hardcore drugs and i feel the same way about them. i too, have written poems on this. nice job :)

Very good poem. Anyone that knows or knew someone that is a drug addict can relate to this which makes it easy to read. I liked it. Very well thought out, and executed. Good job.

And good rhymes by the way.

I like the way this flows. Nice write. 5/5